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Wednesday 29 August 2018

Shooting Hoops (Poem)

SHOOTING HOOPS
Shooting hoops all around
Basketballs hitting the ground
Trying hard to get one goal
But when I try
I just can’t control

Image result for shooting hoopsI get the ball
As I stand up nice and tall
Getting ready to aim
As I have myself ready
To blame

The bell is going to ring
So I need to hurry
I really want to play
Like Stephen Curry!

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    1. Hi, Daliz it's actually about Basketball, Please read again! :)

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  4. Malo e leilei and greetings to you I really liked the way you used punctuation, My favourite part was when you wanted to play like Stephen curry I am pretty sure you will get there one day from yours kindly Monika

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  5. Talofa lava and Malo e lelei Petesa

    i've just finished reading your poem. And you've really made that amazing poem sound right,i just want to say that your poem is amazing and keep up the good work.From Lini

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