Friday, 2 September 2016

Wheelbarrow Race!!!

Pt England School Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

Room 9 was going to do a race. We were doing it at the breeze. I felt so nerves and excited, I was so confused I didn't know what to do.

Mr Baxendine cheated because he had a wheelbarrow. That makes him go faster and it wasn't far for the boys. Because they had to use their hands. I think the boys was not strong enough and they didn’t had enough strength. Then the girls had to go and line up it was so funny when the girls was fighting about who is going to go on the floor. I was struggling,  confused and excited. I was so angry that Mr Baxendine had to use the wheelbarrow and I was cross so I got my friend leg and then when Mr Baxendine said, “ On your marks, get set, gooooo. I was laughing I dropped my friend . I was laughing I couldn't stop.

I felt pretty angry at Mr Baxendine and cross so all I did is to take a deep breath, but I was still angry. So I just put a smile on my face and I know that room 9 was was very upset. So we lined up to get ready to do some work.    



  1. Hi Petesa
    your writing was interesting and cool i really liked it and it made me fell happy by Saane

  2. Hi Petesa
    Your writing was interesting and cool. I really liked it and it made me fell happy. Did you enjoy the race
    By Saane